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All Deviations

Ch 2 of PPF Troubles by ~BlueBear14:iconBlueBear14:



"Mia, wake up Mia." said a comforting voice, as Mia opens her eyes eveyting is blurry, bu the voice is clearer. "Micheal, Micheal is that you?" asked Mia, "Yeah its me. What were you thinking of going with Scott! Who knows what he would have done to you!" asked Micheal, "Oh come on! I wake up and your getting on me about that!" Did you get the whold story, like he had May at knifepoint!" asked Mia as she sits up, "and shouldnt you be in the hospital and not in my room!!!" and Mia turns and pouts at the wall. "Well they didnt tell me that part, but you still shouldnt have gone with Scott! and your right i shouldnt have started on that subject, but at least you guys got 1st place! oh and i just had some cuts and bruises, nothing big." said Micheal, and he gave her a bear hug. "Cant..........Breath....." said Mia barely, then Micheal loosened his hug.

There was a knock on the door, "Come in." said Mia, and the door opened. "Nick! John! What are you doing here???" said Mia the guys walk up and give her a hug, "Well, your mom called and she told us that you were awake." said Nick, "and so we decided to stop by. Apprently we werent the first people here." and he looked at Micheal, then John said "You should take a shower you have alot of people to see, everyones been worried about you, we didnt know why you blacked out." and then he messed up her hair even more. "HEY! Wait what do you mean I have alot of people to see???? Its only been a day right!!!" said Mia worried. "Mia its been 3 days, the doc's thought it may have been exhaghstion and stress that made you black out." answered Nick. "WHAT!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!" and then, "Okay everyone out! i have to take a shower and get to the pet shop!!!!! What time is it?" asked Mia. "2pm, your not late, and you have 2 hours left." answered John. Once everyone had left, Mia went and took a shower, when she got out she saw someone on the bed, "Who are you??" asked Mia, "Uh i dont know how to explain this but, I'm the future you." said the person. And Mia turn the lights on.
©2008 ~BlueBear14
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i know its short but its all i have right now for this story. i try to put some more up.\

Again i changed Terri's name to Mia
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~jayblade14:iconjayblade14: Apr 12, 2008, 4:10:05 PM
I'll tell you what you need to edit Monday.

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~BlueBear14:iconBlueBear14: Apr 13, 2008, 9:47:39 AM
okay, let me guess its that bad

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Princess of Kicking Butt coming through! Move unless you want to get hurt!
~jayblade14:iconjayblade14: Apr 13, 2008, 12:02:16 PM
No it's not bad.

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~BlueBear14:iconBlueBear14: Apr 16, 2008, 5:21:35 PM
i'm checking on that name thing. i think i have the same name for the charaters.

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Princess of Kicking Butt coming through! Move unless you want to get hurt!
~jayblade14:iconjayblade14: Apr 16, 2008, 6:49:24 PM
ok

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~BlueBear14:iconBlueBear14: Apr 19, 2008, 4:52:17 PM
yeah i'll put that on my next artist comment, if i ever get the third chapter.

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Princess of Kicking Butt coming through! Move unless you want to get hurt!
~jayblade14:iconjayblade14: Apr 19, 2008, 5:12:20 PM
ok.

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~BlueBear14:iconBlueBear14: Apr 19, 2008, 5:34:01 PM
okay!

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Princess of Kicking Butt coming through! Move unless you want to get hurt!